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1. akatsu Baki

   she didnt keep the first one to not touch your toy when she lost her wager why believe her now…

   April 29, 2025 at 5:32 pm

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2. Katrin Schirmer

   i mean at least he admits it. i guess thats the fun of a story where someone transmigrates into s story they wrote themselves, they get to experience all the flaws of the world they creates first hand. lol.

   February 28, 2025 at 8:36 am

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3. WonnaBeWilson

   I've finally caught up with the current manhwa, and I'm gonna give my opinion:

   So the gist of this story is that the author of the novel is transmigrated into the body of Rasen Mayton, which is later changed to Larsen Mayton, a third-rate bratty villain who is doomed to die by the time he reaches 17 by either his cold-hearted authoritarian-esque family or the main character whom he wrote to be extremely overpowered.

   The Setting:
   The author/Larsen needs to simply survive in the world he wrote about, though the biggest problem is that it is on the brink of total war between the clans of Mage, Martial, and Sword (MC).

   So Larsen either has to kill/Befriend the MC because the somewhat inevitable extermination war between clans will happen. Or do anything else that may contribute to his survival. Larsen's primary focus is becoming the most powerful he can be (Even though the MC is written to have power-scaling and power-creep relevant to whom they're fighting) as he's the author. Therefore, he knows the intricacies of his world-building.

   Larsen somehow has the ability of a Javascript; he can rewrite his world and alter and erase any history, reality, or relationships. The problem is that if any of his edits to the story disrupt the cohesiveness of the world, he will die due to poor writing.

   Overall Rating: 6.8/10
   – The story's pretty mid, the romance is a slow-burn, and you can probably breeze through the entire manhwa in 2 weeks and still feel that the story isn't progressing.

   February 26, 2025 at 6:12 pm

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4. Trashcomment

   Bro went back in time just to lose to the mc again… I don’t see any progress no matter how much he claims he’s become stronger

   February 25, 2025 at 10:38 am

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5. david

   a joke thats what he just happens to have a little more knowledge

   February 25, 2025 at 7:29 am

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6. Chillin

   Ngl u right but consider this they have magic which means a lot less Constraints if they didn’t advance at least a lil bit faster than us they would have to be hella advanced in magic (which would still fix some problems) so cut the author some lack and leave it at that

   February 25, 2025 at 6:19 am

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7. Penyamun

   author just dragged this 3 circle scenes too much.
   He just achieved first and second circle with just breathing.
   And what’s this? He can’t reach third circle itself
   And his women friend just reach third circle out of nowhere
   So who is the mc here…

   February 25, 2025 at 3:38 am

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8. Mateusz Ryba

   dropped i hate irelia she is after father the biggest villain a child murderer she become child murderer for family it is what family doing is right so it is right to murder 999999 kids by her logic and author mc logic fck mc too because he made her

   February 23, 2025 at 7:01 pm

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9. Mateusz Ryba

   i hate ivelia the most a monster murdering kids even if she didnt had she was powerful enough to not kill that child and let him life but instead she killed him and this tear not fits her behavior and action… she burned the child alive to bones or nothing from what i see? maybe not even bones but if it wasnt fast like with adults… then she saw child's brain and all melting… fucking monster i hope she will die and not have kids she cant have kids and fck israel XD

   February 23, 2025 at 7:00 pm

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10. Md Siddique

    Yoo man that's cool as fu*k

    February 18, 2025 at 5:08 am

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11. 憂鬱

    It's always the youngest son or something of somebody isnt it?

    February 11, 2025 at 5:00 am

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12. SadidKingYT

    Tbh i think its too early to make enemys out of everyone i think he should have asked for something like having accsess to higher tier books in the library. Which would have been a more safer choice where he builds up strength and when he has like 4th circle then ask do some thing big then ask for this request.

    February 5, 2025 at 6:41 pm

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13. SadidKingYT

    Bro i bet the protector is about to gouge his eyes out after this one lmao

    February 5, 2025 at 6:01 pm

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14. Adamaximus

    Well, this is either a 'curse' or 'blessing' situation, no? Me, I suspect an 'unwanted blessing', yes?

    February 5, 2025 at 4:51 am

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15. tf2.

    Man the author and artist really take lot of time sigh 😕

    February 4, 2025 at 5:29 am

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16. Muramata San's worshipper

    Bro's upset over a random disqus profile😭

    February 2, 2025 at 9:26 pm

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    1. Spryzen

       yours is kinda crazy too gng

       February 3, 2025 at 12:18 pm

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17. Tsa

    Actually Large family libraries were common before the printing press was a thing. It was used as a sign of wealth as well as a repository of knowledge for the fam and those the family invites. Also if they can teleport books instantly I don't think that it would be crazy to think that they could immediately transplant ink from one surface to another or instantly copy a book. We're currently following someone that sucks at magic so we the readers don't know much about how it works.
    Also we don't know if the maids/shadows are supposed to be teaching kids as a school normally would. They definitely seem competent enough to cover the basics.
    I don't know about the Light Novel (if there is one, I'm just assuming), but I don't think we've seen any indication that there are "no ranged weapons." and we don't know anything about the wider public's literacy rate because 90% of the characters are from rich as fuck houses.

    February 2, 2025 at 6:21 am

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18. Venoltar

    Everything you said it pretty much spot on. Also the fact you took this much time shows you were rather vested in the premise, so it is a shame you were let down. Unfortunately this medium is the literary equivalent of junk food. Expecting it to meet the standards of even a basic published novel is quite ambitious and only a few have ever reached that standard. I would suggest either going into these with much lower expectations, or just reading published novels instead.

    February 2, 2025 at 12:46 am

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19. Venoltar

    It wasn't their brand in the first place, they just picked an established religious symbol and used it for themselves. It is no more talented than if I started up a horrific regime and used the apple logo.

    February 1, 2025 at 9:28 pm

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20. Monarch Of The Shadows

    Bro suddenly felt the urge to hit the darkskinned ChildChild💀

    January 28, 2025 at 1:47 am

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21. Evodio Tovar Jr.

    Enjoying this series so far

    January 26, 2025 at 12:52 am

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22. Evodio Tovar Jr.

    Azure dot's? Is this like cancer?

    January 25, 2025 at 4:24 am

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23. Jacketed

    Bro he looks good when his hairs is down seriously

    January 22, 2025 at 6:01 pm

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24. Jacketed

    If he became stronger cassin will became stronger too because of cassin character design so it will not consider any cheating he is just piercing 2 birds with 1 arrow

    January 22, 2025 at 5:44 pm

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25. Jellycuber

    agreed

    January 17, 2025 at 7:18 pm

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26. Muhammad Randi

    is it wrong to feel so DOWN BAD to that 3rd Young Lady ??

    January 16, 2025 at 7:12 am

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