idk man, most of the plot feels forced. Kinda tough to get into this. Even though the adorable little sister act usually hits, in this one she just feels like a prop doing random bs. I’m sure her being a nerd is going to be propped up and turned into some magistrate bs per usual but the build up is so trash. The gang brother on top of it is absolutely annoying, and i’m almost certain if they removed him suddenly no one would care. Dude is basically in the story to introduce random new antagonists. And its a wonder how the 3 were surviving with absolute trash survival skills. The premise of the story is nice but i think it needed a much darker tone for it to work. The whole light hearted OP bro returns to help dumbass siblings strat doesnt work, because you can already imagine how much better it would be if the siblings had dark futures hovering over them seeking protection while working in a brothel or something as guards while the women take care of the sister. Then brother returns and protects the brothel women and story goes from there.
Now its just “oh look, another old man with no family seems to be retiring and waiting for someone to hand over his entire business to” lol. Such lazy story writing is so annoying ngl
Tiddies
I agree in the sense I hate this “hidden identity” stuff because it’s written so cliche.
Problem occurs -> mc conveniently leaves -> problem solved -> another problem occurs while mc is gone -> mc solves that too
virgin_cultivator
idk man, most of the plot feels forced. Kinda tough to get into this. Even though the adorable little sister act usually hits, in this one she just feels like a prop doing random bs. I’m sure her being a nerd is going to be propped up and turned into some magistrate bs per usual but the build up is so trash. The gang brother on top of it is absolutely annoying, and i’m almost certain if they removed him suddenly no one would care. Dude is basically in the story to introduce random new antagonists. And its a wonder how the 3 were surviving with absolute trash survival skills. The premise of the story is nice but i think it needed a much darker tone for it to work. The whole light hearted OP bro returns to help dumbass siblings strat doesnt work, because you can already imagine how much better it would be if the siblings had dark futures hovering over them seeking protection while working in a brothel or something as guards while the women take care of the sister. Then brother returns and protects the brothel women and story goes from there.
Now its just “oh look, another old man with no family seems to be retiring and waiting for someone to hand over his entire business to” lol. Such lazy story writing is so annoying ngl