not only do all the adults trick him constantly, he’s naive asf buddies lived an indefinite amount of lives yet still this gulibale? is it bc he being influenced by his baby/toddler body or what? i mean its good but whats the goal? whats the plot? any twist? any drama? besides being an attention seeker who gets used im not too Intune with the dynamic this authors trying to present. now i say all this not bc a story needs heavy drama, well thought out plots or twist what i want to convey is where’s the connection for the reader? this has no relevancy to any of there readers lives how do they expect others to wholeheartedly pay attention to the story if there’s no connection ? good pass time 5.8/10
DumbOmeter
not only do all the adults trick him constantly, he’s naive asf buddies lived an indefinite amount of lives yet still this gulibale? is it bc he being influenced by his baby/toddler body or what? i mean its good but whats the goal? whats the plot? any twist? any drama? besides being an attention seeker who gets used im not too Intune with the dynamic this authors trying to present. now i say all this not bc a story needs heavy drama, well thought out plots or twist what i want to convey is where’s the connection for the reader? this has no relevancy to any of there readers lives how do they expect others to wholeheartedly pay attention to the story if there’s no connection ? good pass time 5.8/10
Amon
Let’s goooo. Demon king power