Heavenly Zaud This main flaw of this story so far is that everything seems predetermined, it’s pretty lacklustre when the author is showing the plot line in plain view – there’s no suspense at all. February 28, 2026 at 8:34 am Log in to Reply
Heavenly Zaud
This main flaw of this story so far is that everything seems predetermined, it’s pretty lacklustre when the author is showing the plot line in plain view – there’s no suspense at all.