🤔 I wish it was his parents doing the secret initiation training with him, one after the other, behind each other’s backs. Then maybe the colleagues were there to assist. In that way the two most interesting characters at the moment won’t get shelved like this, plus bonding moments. Bonding with a parent just to contrast with the shock value of the torture, cough, training… There’re be more impact with his changing worldview this way. It’ll be more entertaining to read and draw, less bland as a whole.
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Anyways…
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🤔 I wish it was his parents doing the secret initiation training with him, one after the other, behind each other’s backs. Then maybe the colleagues were there to assist. In that way the two most interesting characters at the moment won’t get shelved like this, plus bonding moments. Bonding with a parent just to contrast with the shock value of the torture, cough, training… There’re be more impact with his changing worldview this way. It’ll be more entertaining to read and draw, less bland as a whole.
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Anyways…
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