Might not be interesting in the start since slow introduction an opposite of this would be “skip hero” or somet like this with interesting start but confusing story but I haven’t gotten far in that story or this so don’t take my word on it
I agree with the other commenter, but idk if it’s really due to the author, or the story board artist, or scene writer / adapter, if… this was adapted from a novel. I didn’t check.
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It’s just that, the premise could’ve been executed better. The material was interesting, unique enough among the same manhwas in the genre, but still taps into what’s already out there.
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Having two classes of power reminds me of Sky High as an example. Parents being secretive made me recall Mr and Mrs Smith, so I’m kind of expecting the MC’s parents have weighty back stories, given they both have implied connections to important people or organizations. And black hole / white hole instead of portals gave it a fresh coat of paint.
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But the execution made it really bland. And the supposed highest points, were undermined.
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It’s too early for me to judge but I guess it’s charm would be just this and it’ll be generic stuff from here on out. As a reader, I’m hoping that I’m wrong so that I’ll enjoy reading it.
Ngl, this story seems original yet the intro is still so bad for first two chapter. Early chapters should be good to gain the attention of the reader. So farz the author is so bad.
Discusqueezy
Might not be interesting in the start since slow introduction an opposite of this would be “skip hero” or somet like this with interesting start but confusing story but I haven’t gotten far in that story or this so don’t take my word on it
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I agree with the other commenter, but idk if it’s really due to the author, or the story board artist, or scene writer / adapter, if… this was adapted from a novel. I didn’t check.
.
It’s just that, the premise could’ve been executed better. The material was interesting, unique enough among the same manhwas in the genre, but still taps into what’s already out there.
.
Having two classes of power reminds me of Sky High as an example. Parents being secretive made me recall Mr and Mrs Smith, so I’m kind of expecting the MC’s parents have weighty back stories, given they both have implied connections to important people or organizations. And black hole / white hole instead of portals gave it a fresh coat of paint.
.
But the execution made it really bland. And the supposed highest points, were undermined.
.
It’s too early for me to judge but I guess it’s charm would be just this and it’ll be generic stuff from here on out. As a reader, I’m hoping that I’m wrong so that I’ll enjoy reading it.
CharlesFromTheFuture
Ngl, this story seems original yet the intro is still so bad for first two chapter. Early chapters should be good to gain the attention of the reader. So farz the author is so bad.