i think i understand now whats missing in this story. Its actually really nice and the premise is good too, but it lacks the punch because MC hasn’t decisively managed to punish anyone yet. Even his decisions are very arbitrary as he notices new changes instead of prancing upon obvious oppurtunities instantly and then going for the unknown ones. Worst part is his interaction with young lady heavenly demon are so arbitrary when he was clearly told about her past self by none other than herself. It feels like her revealing secrets for him to seduce her was just a useless plot point because he never uses anything. The only reason she likes him is coz he showed some strength out of nowhere. It feels inconsequential that he ever learnt anything about her. Dude hasn’t used one thing, or tried to flirt with her or tease her. He just gets scared any time he sees her and then randomly pretends to care about her with random emotions from nostalgia. The story has a good premise and yet its kinda poorly tied in so the plot just feels like its forced into progression. I like it but it definitely needs to step up his regression and love aspects. This just feels like the generic “oh i remember that, what a great opportunity, this time i will have that” kinda plot
virgin_cultivator
i think i understand now whats missing in this story. Its actually really nice and the premise is good too, but it lacks the punch because MC hasn’t decisively managed to punish anyone yet. Even his decisions are very arbitrary as he notices new changes instead of prancing upon obvious oppurtunities instantly and then going for the unknown ones. Worst part is his interaction with young lady heavenly demon are so arbitrary when he was clearly told about her past self by none other than herself. It feels like her revealing secrets for him to seduce her was just a useless plot point because he never uses anything. The only reason she likes him is coz he showed some strength out of nowhere. It feels inconsequential that he ever learnt anything about her. Dude hasn’t used one thing, or tried to flirt with her or tease her. He just gets scared any time he sees her and then randomly pretends to care about her with random emotions from nostalgia. The story has a good premise and yet its kinda poorly tied in so the plot just feels like its forced into progression. I like it but it definitely needs to step up his regression and love aspects. This just feels like the generic “oh i remember that, what a great opportunity, this time i will have that” kinda plot