Hm, i dont get why he keeps gambling, he doesnt necessarily seem addicted… Id understand if he wanted to get better at dominoes, but it doesnt seem all that useful at the cost of all your riches?
… I’m liking this story quite a bit, but the MC’s ‘flaws’ are forcing him to act dumb. First, he has sex with the woman of that important clan, a woman he barely knew, but then, when he meets an interesting woman from that tribe, he leaves without saying anything? Then, the gambling problem. If after every plot, where he achieves something and earns some wealth, he is going to lose it, over and over again, to be forced to make dumb choices, this isn’t a good path. I certainly don’t want the author having omnipotence to throw the MC into any dumb plot he imagines without reason. There must be some reasonable thread connecting plots… But this feels way too forced by now… and we are only in chapter 26….
Faythefae
Hm, i dont get why he keeps gambling, he doesnt necessarily seem addicted… Id understand if he wanted to get better at dominoes, but it doesnt seem all that useful at the cost of all your riches?
Spirit-Mouse
… I’m liking this story quite a bit, but the MC’s ‘flaws’ are forcing him to act dumb. First, he has sex with the woman of that important clan, a woman he barely knew, but then, when he meets an interesting woman from that tribe, he leaves without saying anything? Then, the gambling problem. If after every plot, where he achieves something and earns some wealth, he is going to lose it, over and over again, to be forced to make dumb choices, this isn’t a good path. I certainly don’t want the author having omnipotence to throw the MC into any dumb plot he imagines without reason. There must be some reasonable thread connecting plots… But this feels way too forced by now… and we are only in chapter 26….